TFSubmissions on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/tfsubmissions/art/Animation-TG-Preview-584245338TFSubmissions

Deviation Actions

TFSubmissions's avatar

Animation TG Preview

Published:
24.2K Views

Description

Commission sample for :icongoldwyn11:

me and Gold have come to an agreement on hourly rates and such so I'll be working with Gold over the next few months to make my very first motion picture TG/TF.

I COULD tell you what the full TG/TF is but where's the fun in that? You'll just have to wait until the animation is finished ;)

Here's the first section of the animation, nothing much but it's a start to something big ;)

www.youtube.com/watch?v=eddVUk…

Any critique will be most appreciated!
Image size
1920x1080px 608.25 KB
© 2016 - 2024 TFSubmissions
Comments18
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
pokemonlake's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Not bad. Maybe you could cut the 'still a boy' part a bit and make the changes to the head more gradual, but if there are changes down there that make Gold look more like a girl, then I would like to see them. Also, the biggest problem is that the male Gold blinks like, 5 or 6 times but the female version of Gold doesn't blink at all. I would prefer the male Gold to blink 2 times in 3-4 seconds, then the changes happen in roughly 6 seconds, then get Gold to blink once or twice in the rest of the time. That would make the animation pretty good. I'd also like to see the animation colored. It helps.